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Blood and roses (The sequel to Red Darkness)
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Title: Blood and Roses
Author: Dandygrrrl  http://www.myspace.com/fifidelioncourt
Pairing: Frank/Gerard, (My chemical romance) Bob(Mcr.)/Ryan Ross (Patd), Gabe Saporta (Cobra starship)/ Mikey Way (Mcr),  hinted Omc/ Omc, well Gerard and Mikey's parents must have done it at least twice right. OFC/Mike Carden (Tai)  Pete Wentz/ Patrick Stump (Fob)
Rating: Overall NC-17
Summary: Part one of the sequel to Red Darkness. Gerard's a dom vampire and Frank's a submissive Feratile (A vampire that can get pregnate) Set five years after red darkness
Disclaimer: Don’t own anyone but I might try kidnapping bhahahaha
Warning: Maybe every warning in the book, any chapter with a b after them are very gory. There's male preg, bdsm, rape, violance, psychopathic vampire's, tortour, cross dressing, random killing of chav's and jocks. I suppose you can put gender fuck in as well as the fertile's seem to get classed as women by the vampire's, idk. Some het. 

Ok no as gory as I thought it should be, but if anyone got any idea's of what should happen in other b chapters let me know


Thank's to Devon who gave the idea of Doll and Daylin and is helping me a great deal with plot. Chapter Seventeen is without a beta so sorry folk but people have been asking when it will be up so here it is.
one  ) ( two )( three )( chapter four )( chapter five )( six )( seven )( chapter eight )( nine )ten )eleven )( twelve )( thirteen ) thirteen b )fourteen )FIFTHTEEN )sixteen )16b )seventeen )eighteen )chapter nineteen )twenty )twenty one )Twenty two not betaed )
twenty three )twenty four ) twenty five )( twenty six )( twenty seven )

 

 

Zacky pulled Raven up by the scruff of his neck growling. He could see that Raven was petrified but he didn’t care, this scum had tried to hurt his children.

He slammed Ravens head down onto the hood of his car before lifting him and slamming him down onto the pavement. He wanted to totally rip him apart but he didn’t want it to be over to soon.

Zacky looked up as he saw the headlights of a car, which quickly pulled over. He frowned as he saw his daughter running towards him, tears that made her black eyeliner run down her face like macabre war paint.

“Dad… that thing… Patty… he nearly killed Patty,” Daylin sobbed her pale hands still covered in her best friends blood.

Zacky looked her shocked. He had known Patrick since he was born and his anger intensified, his hand going around the humans throat and lifting him of the floor. Raven was kicking his legs feebly but it was only when his face had started to turn blue Zacky let him drop onto the floor. Zacky watched coldly as Raven knelt on the floor coughing.

“Daylin sweetheart go to the hospital with Mike, I think it’s time someone taught Raven a lesson,”

 

Raven moaned as Zacky lifted him and slammed him in the trunk of his car much in the same way that Raven had did to Ryan, but as Zacky drove the car he was thinking of far worst things to do to Raven.

 

Raven eyes blinked open to find his hand chained above his head and he was standing on a small stage. A crowd of vampires had gathered round him to witness his demise. He pulled desperately at the chains.

Zacky walked around him, while he decided what he was going to do to him. He smiled as he looked at the small audience that had gathered round.

He took a small razor blade before running it down Raven’s back. Just enough to draw blood. He laughed as Raven sobbed.

“Please I hardly touched you,” Zacky laughed cutting deeper before starting to pull the skin away.

Raven was screaming as Zacky started to cut and peel flash away slowly revealing the muscles underneath.

Zacky took great delight in how Raven was squirming and pulling at the chains that wore holding him captive.

Zacky could only imagine the pain Raven must be going through as he slowly skinned him, each time the cuts wore getting deeper and deeper until in some parts the white of Raven bones wore showing through.

He knew Raven would soon be dead from either blood lost of shock he unchained Raven pulling him up by his bloody hair before looking at the crowd.

“Dinner time.” He smiled before throwing Raven to the vampires that stood watching.


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THANK YOU! You have made my boysbathroom lingering tornado filled debree fliying day!!!!! ^________^

This I say to Raven- "....Bitch please. you thought you could get away with that, HAH!"

well you know he wouldn't

yeah, that d-bag deserved to be punished. heh, you should include a torture in this story that is somewhere along the lines of a spiky or poison covered dildo. sounds sick...well it would be. hahaha

omg that is sick but may be used don't forget Doll is still alive

can i get a MUWAHAHAHAHAHA!

Go Zacky, that bastards deserve everything that Zackys got to give hime

Yes! I loved this so much :D
<3

JEEE.... :))) finaly... heh... though I expected more gore, blood and few thousand more words of torture... :P stii... thank you =) you are da best :)

OMG THATS SO GROSS.I LOVE IT!!!!

PLEASE WRITE MORE

Awesome :D i love revenge :D
xxXxx

ahhhhhhhh!
yes!
fuck yes!
you are awesome!
*tackle hugs*
yesyesyes!

falls of chair yet again lol, go over to bunnyficcorner where the whole universe is being rewritten as orginal fic.

Yay! That was good! I was waiting for someone to take care of Raven. Now what'll happen to Maggot??

Pete killed Maggot but don't worry there's still Doll to take care of

yes... oh yes, this is very good... good job killing Raven! And yay bloodplay! it'd be cute if frank and ryan got a kick at him too. :) woo hoo!

mmm didn't think about that

That was fucken awesome!!!

Hooray for torture!

I was wondering when you were gonna update today.

I will try and update soon ;D

u never fail

amazing as always

I loved it, as always, but I have a bit of a tip.

I noticed that you used the word "moaning" when describing Raven's anguish, and I though I might suggest a better word.

Normally moaning is used in pleasurable circumstances, which obviously, does not apply to Raven's predicament.

Instead, I would substitute "groaning" which has a very similar sound, but is used in umcomfortable or painful situations.

Just a thought.

Oh! And I've nearly forgotten! Whatever happened to my dear William? We haven't seen him or Brendon since Red Darkness, and I miss them both terribly.

Would it be possible to bring them back?

Good point moaning I think is the wrong word to use and yes groaning would be a better term.

Hopfully William will be back soon he should be brought back as one of Mike Carden's clan but I'm not sure how to bring Brendon back into this yet but I will try,

YAY! I love how Zacky threw Ravin to the vampires! So great!

Awesome update!!!

AHH YOU HAVE TO WRITE MORE I LOVE THIS MORE FERARD LOL

I'm going through a serious writters block on this story but don't worry I love the storie to so it will be written at some point hopefully soon

okay, now i'm much better, raven FINALLY got his ass beat.
well, worse than that.

haha, okay, now you need to write a sex scene, i would LOOOOVE that.

Well the plot line is now being based on whats happening in the red darkness chat room.
You can find the chat room through frank iero (Fake lol) Myspace
myspace.com/reddarkness6...myspace.com/reddarkness666

But yep there be a sex scean coming up I'm sure

Is there more after this? Cuz, I'm addicted.

Your story is equivalent to crack. Once you've started, you can't stop. I love this.

xoxo

I'm glad you like it. I think people either hate or love it. Yes there is more, you can find Red darkness in my tags and it carrys in in blood and roses, which I'm still writting.

Oh sorry that was Blood and roses, but there's blood and roses part two which you hasn't been taged yet but it's on my journal.

I have to search for part two again...don't I?

Lol, I'll always re-read this just so you know. I'm just that in love with it.

xoxo Tabi

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