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Blood and roses (The sequel to Red Darkness)
[info]dandygrrrl

Title: Blood and Roses
Author: Dandygrrrl  http://www.myspace.com/fifidelioncourt
Pairing: Frank/Gerard, (My chemical romance) Bob(Mcr.)/Ryan Ross (Patd), Gabe Saporta (Cobra starship)/ Mikey Way (Mcr),  hinted Omc/ Omc, well Gerard and Mikey's parents must have done it at least twice right. OFC/Mike Carden (Tai)  Pete Wentz/ Patrick Stump (Fob)
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[info]audrey1nd
Rating: Overall NC-17
Summary: Part one of the sequel to Red Darkness. Gerard's a dom vampire and Frank's a submissive Feratile (A vampire that can get pregnate) Set five years after red darkness
Disclaimer: Don’t own anyone but I might try kidnapping bhahahaha
Warnings: Bdsm, blood play, Gerard's a psycopathic vampire as I said in Red Darkness I wanted to  write from the point of view of psychopathic bastard and I enjoyed it . Very bad language. mpreg as in this au certain male vampire's can get pregnant. A very dom Gerard and a very sub Frank. Many chapter's may be pwp, a lot of vampire smut, and cross dressing.
Thank's to Devon who gave the idea of Doll and is helping me a great deal with plot. Oh and can I say to a few people who asked me to add them on my space I can't because I need you sir names but feel free to add me just point out you been reading my fan fic and I will approve you. 

Allso if there's anyone got any orginal fic, plot bunnys, or poems I just started a community called [info]bunnyficcorner please join and tell anyone who might be intreasted in joining. Anything goes there but I would really like it to be filled with compleatly out there fic. The more bizarre the better.


one  ) two )three )chapter four )chapter five )six )seven )chapter eight )nine )ten )eleven )twelve )


 

Chapter Thirteen

Raven ran from the warehouse. He wasn’t sure how long he had been pass out for, but he knew that fertile would tell others about the warehouse.

He needed to get in touch with Jason and the lad’s. He really couldn’t give a fuck what happened to Doll. He couldn’t help but think of that slut Daylin. If she hadn’t had turned up everything would have been fine. His hand went to the back of his head to feel the bump where she had hit him.

“Fucking fertile bitch,’’ he swore to himself. He knew now that he had to change his plans. She was too much trouble to go after. He thought about the little strawberry blond she always hung around with. Yes, that fertile would be perfect.

Pete dragged Doll out of the warehouse and threw her down. He wanted nothing more then to fucking kill her. The hatred he felt for the toy at that moment in time compared to nothing he had ever felt before. He knew that Ray was right though, the fate that awaited her was far worse than a quick death.

He looked down at her and sneered as he saw she was crying. His hands turned into fists he was finding it harder to hold himself back. All he could think about was how Ryan must have been begging them to stop. He could only imagine the anger that Bob must be feeling at this moment. He looked over at Ray. Ray was looking down at Doll with wrath and Pete could tell he wanted nothing more than to kill her to.

“Please… I beg you… Please,” Doll sobbed, looking at them both. She then screamed as Ray walked over to her and backhanded her.

“Don’t you dare, just don’t you fucking dare beg for any sort of mercy,” Ray roared, pulling her up by her hair. “Fucking tell me, did Ryan beg for mercy?”

Doll didn’t answer with any more than a whimper as she looked up into Ray’s now black eyes. She always remembered Ray as being one of the calmer vampires, but his Rage was terrifying.

“FUCKING ANSWER ME, SLUT. DID RYAN BEG FOR MERCY?”

“Yes,” she sobbed, trying to pull away as Ray’s hand tightened in her hair.

“I couldn’t hate you any more right now,” Ray said before spitting in her face. “Tell me slut, did you plan on this? Did you fucking plan on raping a fertile you disgusting bitch?”

“We didn’t plan on Ryan…” Doll sobbed.

“Who the fuck did you plan on then?” Pete growled, walking over, his eyes full of such cold fury that Doll froze in terror. “If you didn’t plan on Ryan who the fuck was you going to go after.”

“Raven has a list. Mostly fertiles from his school. At the top is a girl called Daylin Vengeance,” Doll whimpered then screamed as Pete kicked her.

“You know her?” Ray asked looking at Pete. He had heard the name before, but it wasn’t the name of someone he knew well.

“She Patrick’s best friend,” Pete growled, then the look on Doll’s face told him something he didn’t want to know the answer to. “Who fucking else is on that list? Fucking tell me now bitch.”

Doll wanted to scream, she wanted to run because right now she knew who had been put second on the list was someone she didn’t want to tell Pete.

“SLUT, TELL ME NOW.” Pete shouted in her face.

“P…Patrick Stump,” she stuttered in fear as the beast in Pete completely took over. She screamed as Ray pushed her over to Pete who grabbed her round the throat. She choked as Pete held her up against the wall, his other fist connected with her stomach.

“Patrick Stump is the fertile whom I’m going to make my mate, and you're telling me you were planning on hurting my Patty.” His voice was deadly quiet, right before his fist punched her in the belly again.

“Ray, just because she’s in for a fate worse than death doesn’t mean we can’t have a little fun.”

 

Yes this was quite a short chapter but I'm wondering if you guys want a descriptive description of what Ray and Pete does to Doll or should I leave it to the imagination.


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This story has been keeping me sain because of the fact that we are moving accross the country ^0^ thank you

I'm humbled by you contant prise. You make me feel speacel :)

You should feel special ^0^ You are a extreamly fantastic writer. :DDD

gahh, i don't think i've ever commented this before and i apologize because i love this and the prequal very much.
i love the whole concept of this, and doll and raven are sluts and should die. but i understand that they would be pissed because of being classed as second class citizens just 'cos of fertiles etc.
but i would love to be a vamp in this world that you have created.
and =O for frankie vengeance!!

xxxxxxxxxxxx

much love and vampire kisses

Yes I can understand why they would be pissed as well but I think I stated before I wanted to write from point of views witch are compleatly the oppisite to what I am like. I feel I'm pretty empathic (Don't know if I spelt that right.) So I wanted to write from a point of view of callus psycopathic bastards. I'm a little worried I'm enjoying it to much though, as I have so many plot bunnys hopping around in this universe lol. Sorry for the long replie there, and thanks for commenting. <3

xxx
WELL,YEAH,I WANT A VERY DESCIPTIVE DESCRIPTION OF
WHAT RAY AND PETE DO TO DOLL! *cough*
Sorry bout' thee ranting. Ha. ;)
I'm really starting to kinda sorta LIKE Pete in this
fic...cause' truly ever since I've know Fall Out Boy
EXSITED I always hated him. ;)
LOLZ.
Adored this update<3. Can't wait for moreee. =]
xxx
-Pansy

Yeah I got to admit I have a really thing for Pete even though I think he might be hard work to put up with all the time, but my heart will always belong to Gerard (Umm sorry to my bf.)

Edited at 2008-06-22 10:38 pm (UTC)

oh and I be writting 13b I decided where if you don't want total sadism you can skip it but I think it will only be posted in my journal and friend locked because I'm nervouse about writting it. But I found so pretty brutal fic on lj witch I've been reading a lot of.

add me please, cos I would love to read those sadistic chapter!
sorry, I`ve never commented before, but I`ve read this mind-blowing story from the very beginning

I added you but It won't friend locked on my journal just have massive warnings.

...me thinks this fic is made of win.
therefore, it deserves some win cookies.
*gives cookies* fresh from the oven!

Oh Man Doll is so going to get it and I can't wait :P

More soon!!!!!!!

OH MY GOD!!!
Pete should go find Patrick before Raven get's to him.
Doll so deserves what is coming towards her.
You have made my day
<3

there be more soon. I'm glad your liking it :)

ooh. :]

You gave some pre-show ass-kicking, Thank you! Hell no Doll, can't mess with Patrick. Pete'll kick your ass. <3 I love it.
Ooh. I hope pete also takes down Raven, show him who he's messing with.

Now i'm looking forward to the real, real ass-kicking. ;]
can't wait for the next update!

there be more soon but the real ass kicking will be in my journal in 13b where they get medievel on Doll's ass. It's a chapter that you haven't got to read, but yeah it's will go into graphic detile.

oh. And Ray was awesome. <3

It's always the quiet and calm one's with the crazy side. :]

My thought's when I started imagining what Ray would be like, hopefully soon Ray with have a mate, just got to decide who to pair him with.

Gah! Words cant even describe how much i love you for writing this now. Your such an amazing writer:) i think you should let us imagine what pete does to her. But i do want you to write about what bob does. I wanna read about him torturing doll keep up the good writing.

thankyou, I writting where Doll gets her ass kicked in 13b but it will just be posted at my journal and you won't need to read it because it won't effect the plot line if you don't read it

see, i wish i could write as good as you, and yes i promise there will be vampires in my fic, i'm a sucker for werewolves as well.
AHH I LOVE THIS FIC, MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!

Cool but I do think your a fantastic writter as well I just asked to make sure about the vampires because I want to keep fobvampirehunt just for bandom boys in supernatual situations else it just be the same as every other com.

There be more soon

I'M SO GLAD U UPDATED! SWEETIE....♥♥♥

Wow. Your writing has improved!

thankyou oh cousin of mine.

I think the more I write the better I'm getting. ;D

YAY update!!
can't wait for next chapter!
this was kick butt!

Wow that chapter was brilliant! I really want to read chapter 13B i dont mind a bit of gore :)

It will be friend locked in fobvampirehunt so join the community and you will be able to read it soon.

God i love this fic. It justs keep getting better! I'm looking forward to 13B so much, and this fic is top on my list at the min - i feel like i'm checking for updates constantly!! lol
Well done :)
xxXxx

glad you like it that much ;D

Ummm sorry there be more soon though, and yes there be more Daylin, just for you Devon

This is incredible, in every way. I love it.

But (as much as she now deserves to be tortured to death) Doll has every right to want revenge. So do all most of the humans and slaves.

Other than that, though, I cannot wait for more updates!

I totally agree with your comment about Doll has every right for revenge but I started the red darkness au to see if I could write from the point of view of compleat psycho's. I think by all the lovely comments I been getting I'm doing a good job. I wrote other vampire fic but the vampire's allways turn out to be good or there bad and then turn good, and I read so many vampire's fic's like that so I thought why not make the vampire's compleat bastards, write from there point of view, not have some knight in shining armore to come and save the day for say Doll or anyone else oppessed to the vampires. Yep it's a dark fic I agree, and not at all like the other vampire fic's I wrote. Thanks for your comment though

I think my problem is that (as much as I enjoy this fic) I keep thinking about it from the POV of a human (which I obviously am lol). I need to stay in the view you have written and not let myself think about it, because that's what makes me sympathize with Doll.

Or I could just not get so worked up a fictional story and try paying more attention to the Gerard/Frank-ness because it's probably the HOTTEST I've seen in. . .EVER. Seriously.

Yes as I'm writting now I keep feeling sorry for Doll and keep wanting to write that one of the vampire's feel sorry for her and let her go, but then I have to snap out of it because the vampire's just wouldn't act like that. Even the fertiles aren't nice, but I'm glad it's having a effect on you, and I'm glad you find the Gerard and Frank hot.

There's nothing hotter than Gerard being a sadistic bastard to a masochistic Frankie.

(Sorry, I was too lazy to sign in for the previous comments)

thats ok and there be more frerard very soon

:O they need to beat the shit out of Raven >:/

oh he will have but not just yet

Good Chapter ! In my opinion you should write a descriptive chapter on what Ray and Pete do to Doll..<3

there will be but it will be friend locked in fobvampirehunt. I'm nervous about posting it but there's a lot that want to read it and it won't be nice I can tell you.

OHHHH, DETAILS, DETAILS HONEY!!!

this is excellent, as always....can't wait for more!

The what seem to be already infamous 13b chapter will be friend locked at fobvampirehunt so if your not already joined join and your be able to read it very soon.

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